The people ask how Im survivin / but they dont see I am thriving / drunk and driving /
the emotions I feel are real / but I am hiding cause they cant deal / with something so real
my thoughts and feelings are what they steal / but I am ready to re-build /
the knife against my skin / wondering if I cut deep enough will I win / start to sin never get to the fin /
bleeding from my throat with a grin / my life is over but I just begin again / it is my life im never meant to win /
the want me to quit /listen to them tell me way I should rap and shit / I am just getting fit / gather up my wit/ but they want me to strip/
my life of every means leaving me with a lil bit / of sadness and hollowness / they walk in crowds like fallow-this /
but I am like kiss-this / you tried to diss now your cool with me ya wish / your soul is a dirty dish / never to be clean /
I wish people see in between / telling me I am heartless and mean / but it is you can you see I am just a rap fein / my senses are keen

Actually seen some multies here and there. Emotionally this was dope. If you do some multies and punches in your raps you will be tight.

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shit was deep man...
i'd give this an 8.5/10
...liked it alot...love the choice of words